Moved, closed checking with $ Bank, opened w/Charter One.

$ Bank contacted us to advise nsf fees, etc. Auto pmt from water dept was put through about 2 months AFTER closed. I sent each creditor a letter advising them to cancel the auto from that account.

I immediately paid the account in full over the phone...wasn't much..under $150.

He went into co to get a debit card, it never arrived. I called to inquire, he's in chex.

$ did write Charter One a letter advising him we settled the account. Charter One is ok with it.

Would we have any luck getting $ Bank to remove that entry?

I doubt that Dollar will remove based on the fact that you made good on the account. generally banks and credit unions will not remove you, they will only update the record to showing paid and allowing you to remain reported to chex for 5 years from the date of the last payment.

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